Thursday, January 31, 2008

A Poem

This is something I wrote for AP Lit. I had to use two poetic devices and it could only be one sentence. Thankfully, it didn't have to rhyme. ;-) Tell me what you think.

Victory


The roar of sound
Rolls like a wave;
Chanting from heaven,
Dousing the pained bodies
With emotions of bliss.

2 comments:

Shannon said...

I know close to nothing about poetry, so I'll let Juliet properly analyze it. ;-) It's different and I don't think I really get it, but it's different in a good way. I think. ;-) I like it.

Ethan B. said...

Just wait until you get into GB4. You will pretty much be saturated with poetry. It has helped me understand a lot more then I used to. :-)

And there isn't that much to analyze, but for what there is, I am sure Juliet can give you a very good opinion about.

;-)

Thanks.